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I tried my best to please them all…


They said that I always looked too angry
So I shaved off my eyebrows

They said I always dressed bad
So I took off my clothes

They said I cried too much
So I burned out my eyes

They said I wasn't listening
So I tore off my ears

They said I always said the wrong things
So I ripped out my vocal cords

They said I always faked my smile
So I ripped off my lips

They said my hair was a mess
So I cut it off

They said my feet were too big
So I broke them

They said I walked weird
So I saw off my legs

They said I played too much with my fingers
So I pulled off my hands

They said my arms were too thin
So I tore them off

They said my belly looked funny
So I cut out my stomach

They said I sat funny
So I removed my hips

They said I breathe too loud
So I ripped out my lungs

They said I always hung with my head
So I tore it off

They said my skin tone was ugly
So I removed my skin

They said my muscles were weak
So I ripped them off the bones

They said my bones were bad
So I broke them

They said my heart was cold
So I burned it



Finally… They don't say anything more, maybe because I finally pleased them! Or is it because there's nothing left of me?
I dunno...

Made in my head during dinner... I added a few things I missed before...

These words are my own! The 'poem' is written by myself.
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godslove21 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
amazing wow :'(
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godslove21 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
OMG YOU ARE AMAZING !
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Chinchillaplum Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
Thank you :3
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sacossaboon Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Student General Artist
wow. deep...
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Chinchillaplum Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
yeah...
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sacossaboon Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Student General Artist
I like it though! -favorite-
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Chinchillaplum Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
Thank you <3
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rosuto-kia Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
When I was submitting something I saw this in the example part and had to read the entire thing.
This is beautifully written! But how does food and this awesome piece fit together?
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Chinchillaplum Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
I dunno, Thanks <3
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Buttercupwaz Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
Whoooa that was....wow ok good job😅
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